Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
140,517 Literary Works • 673,285 Reviews
Thanks. I'm not so good at the punctuation thing, but I'll work on it.
Hey!!
Ok AWESOME poem!! Just one really tiny thing, commas.
Use tons! After some of the lines I noticed u didn't have a lot of punctuation. Totally fine, I'm just saying, maybe you want to add a little more commas or something.
Other then that, I loved it!
Great job
~M